09
Apr
09

Poor Little Porker

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The water looked so cold. As I walked closer to the edge of the diving board it started to bend and I started to slip. “NOOOOOOOOOO IT’S TO COLD!!!!” I scream. “I’m not ready to die. I see the light!”  The board keeps pointed down and I keep slipping. My tiny frame was shaking. ”HELP I’M FAWING SOMEONE SAVE ME”. No body comes. I’m all alone and I’m going to die. I will fall down into the depths of the water and be gone. I’ll meet the same fate as my father and mother. “NOOOO I’M GOING TO BE BACON!!!!!!!” it was the end for me. I couldn’t hold on any longer. It was time to let go. I slid to the end of the board and tipped right over the edge. “GOODBYE CRUEL WORLD”! The water surrounded me. I was bacon. I can here “poor little porker. He didn’t even have a chance.” And then I go under. All of a sudden I reach the surface. ” I CAN BREATHE!” I scream. I get out of the pool, shake myself off and say “Lets do it again”.

Picture by: loungerie


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3 Responses to “Poor Little Porker”


  1. 1    Rebecca April 24, 2009 at 12:37 pm

    Hi Sam! I like this post. Pigs are awesome. The story is imaginative and funny. Awesome job!

  2. 2    moorehayesamelia May 26, 2009 at 11:24 am

    Haha thats so cool! Did you come up with it your self? Thats cool. Oh my name’s Amelia by the way check out my blog at http://moorehayesamelia.edublogs.org/ Bye!

  3. 3    moorehayesamelia May 29, 2009 at 11:18 am

    I really don’t know why they did it, and I really do care if they had no reason to then why did they do it? I have a wondering mind… =D

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